Writing profile blog 11

Culminating Writers Profile
1. My writings have become better because I learned how to analyze pieces of writings and construct a well developed essay.
2. My strength in writing would have to be writing about personal perspectives and answering prompts. I have reinforced them by reading examples of good essays and writings.
3. Timed writes would have to be my weakest area. I have practiced multiple timed writes to try and  get better.

Evaluating your writing process
1. I would strengthen the concrete details and the intro paragraph to make a better essay.
2. The structure of sentences and grammar errors were easy to correct after peer feedbacks and revision.
3. Creating a better introduction and relating the facts to the thesis was the problem during the revision.

Evaluating your Successes
1. The most successful revision would have to be fixing the conclusion. At first my conclusion made no sense and had no insight, but after the revision it made sense. However I still need to work on my conclusion
2. Using descriptive, narrative, and illustrative writing in my essay did not go so well. I made to much narrative comments rather than facts and that messed up my essay.
3. I believe I did succeed in writing to the audience. I took note that they knowledgeable and expect sophisticated and logical writing.

Being Honest with Self
1. Writing about a single concept intimidated me a lot. I tried to prepare myself by researching the definition of education.
2. Reading about how the word "nigger" was used in the text we read gave me ideas of how the definition of a word can be argued and explored in an essay.
3. I didn't really take ideas from others, but i took some words so my words would not be as repetitive.
4. I learned to organize my essay structure and plan good before writing.
5. I see myself as an average writer right now. I hope to become better at writing essays similar to this one.